At school, we did free writing. Me and my Friend Luke Wrote this together. It's about a game of Football. We played for parklands and we were VS Nomads. Read the story to find out more. In this Piece of work, I think me and Luke wrote a good story in 10 mins. I have no sources only Luke my Buddie for this piece of work. Have you played football before? Do you think you are good at Playing? Tell me in the comments below. Give me some feedback if you want.
Friday, September 10, 2021
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hi Lucas i like your story on the football it was very fun to read but mabey you called add more punctuation
ReplyDeletehey Lucas how is your day going how did your football go i know your really good how did your free writing go on football who is your favourite player nice job i like your story
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